Some countries are struggling with an increase in the rate of crime. Many people think that having more police on the streets is the only way to reduce these increasing levels of crime. To what extent to you agree or disagree? Azerbaijan Some people think parents should supervise their children's activities closely, while others believe children should have more freedom. Azerbaijan More and more people are becoming seriously overweight.
Some people say that increasing the price of fattening foods will solve this problem. To what extend do you agree or disagree? Today, many people do not realise how important the natural world is. How can people learn more about the importance of the natural world? However, others disagree with this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. In many countries, weddings are getting bigger and more expensive than the past. India - General Training Some believe that it is the responsibility of people to take care of the environment.
Others say it is the government that should take care of the environment. Kuwait - General Training March Some people believe that the increasing number of vehicles is one of the biggest problem facing cities, while others believe that cities have bigger challenges. Discuss both views and state your opinion. Nigeria Some people think that men are naturally more competitive than women.
These days, mobile phones and the internet are very important to the ways in which people relate to one another socially. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
Scientists believe that in order to protect the environment, people must use less energy in their daily lives. However, most people have not changed the way they live.
Why do you think many people have not taken individual action? What could be done to encourage them to take action? Films and computer games which contain violence are very popular. Some people believe they have a negative effect on society and so should be banned.
Other people, however, say they are just harmless and help people to relax. Discuss both these points of view and give your own opinion. Many doctors say that people in today's world do not do enough physical exercise. What do you think are the causes of this? Keep reading then, because we are just about to analyse a Band 6. Hold mouse over highlighted words or tap on mobile to see the comments, suggestions and corrections.
Discuss both points of view and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
To many people, it is appropriate to marry for money rather than love. However, I believe that both love and money should be bouncetogether in any marriages. Certainly, money is an important part in our lives [TS]. However, love should be the root of any marriages [TS]. Firstly, it is because love is such a glue to connect two persons which have their own lives, become one NC. Moreover, love makes people growing up because they do not only have responsibility to themselves, but also to their partners as well.
That is why marrying with love is always encouraged. In my opinion, I think that both love and money is both necessary [TS]. Marriage relying on money would be rapidly disintegrated when unfortunately the money is run out. Therefore, love and money should stand together in marriage even though their contribution could be unbalanced NC.
As we have seen, marriage without either money or love would come to an unhappy ending. So I believe that they both have their own contribution to a merry family. Task Response Analysis: This essay follows the task requirements quite well. The opinion is clear. The paragraph on money is not very well developed and not entirely clear. Approximate score for Task Response: Band 7. Coherence is concerned with the effectiveness of what the essay is trying to communicate.
The essay is well structured — each paragraph announces its topic clearly [TS] and the introduction announces the opinion of the writer. Sometimes the ideas are not entirely clear inside the paragraphs see NC. Also the writer has a tendency to be repetitive. What are the reasons for this, and suggest some solutions. Smokers have rights too, so they should be allowed to smoke in public places. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Technology In the last 20 years there have been significant developments in the field of information technology IT , for example the World Wide Web and communication by email.
However, future developments in IT are likely to have more negative effects than positive. People use computers when they work or go banking, but some argue that it will make people isolated and decrease their social skills. To what extent do you agree with this viewpoint? Some people think that computers are more of a hindrance than a help in today's society. Others believe that they are such indispensable tools that they would not be able to live or work without them.
Discuss both opinions and give your opinion. Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basis and a large number of children play computer games.
What are the negative and positive impacts of playing computer games and what can be done to minimize the bad effects?All the bands are approximate. Task Response 3. Lexical Resource 4. Grammatical Range and Accuracy Many test takers are unsure what is wrong with their essay, why they keep scoring Band 6. Is that how you feel, too?
Therefore, smoking should be banned in public places. A marriage relying solely on money might rapidly disintegrate in the unfortunate event of the money running out. In many countries, weddings are getting bigger and more expensive than the past.
Moreover, love makes people grow up because they do not only have responsibility to themselves, but also to their partners as well. India Online education and training is becoming increasingly popular in the business world. They think this would benefit the teenagers doing the unpaid work but also society as a whole. Firstly, it is because love is such a strong bond between two persons who have their own lives, and become one. People use computers when they work or go banking, but some argue that it will make people isolated and decrease their social skills. In contrary, a marriage relying on love would sometimes come to end when they could not earn money to carry out family duties such as paying bills, buying food, etc.
But the same question will likely have appeared in other countries as well. Probably not quite good enough for a 7. India - General Training People live longer today and so people should stay in the workforce longer. Discuss both opinions and give your opinion? In my opinion, I think that both love and money is both necessary. But other people think that success is as much related to mental attitude.
Marriage relying on money would be rapidly disintegrated when unfortunately the money is run out.
Films and computer games which contain violence are very popular. What are the causes of this and what problems does it lead to? Firstly, it is because love is such a strong bond between two persons who have their own lives, and become one.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Firstly, it is because love is such a glue to connect two persons which have their own lives, become one NC.
Kuwait - General Training March Some people believe that the increasing number of vehicles is one of the biggest problem facing cities, while others believe that cities have bigger challenges. Task Response 3. Others believe that it makes their lives more difficult. However, others disagree with this. What are the reasons for this, and suggest some solutions. Nigeria Some people think that men are naturally more competitive than women.